tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9212687647370606680.post263871216648665396..comments2023-05-05T12:00:04.073+00:00Comments on Geraldine Moorkens Byrne: Poetry, Fiction, Non-Fiction: Juvenilia, As PromisedUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9212687647370606680.post-89244615319042421252007-10-11T14:28:00.001+00:002007-10-11T14:28:00.001+00:00like it, but prefer the modern version you posted ...like it, but prefer the modern version you posted a while back (simple love poem?)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9212687647370606680.post-19156191569489113812007-10-11T14:28:00.000+00:002007-10-11T14:28:00.000+00:00I like this but I can see where the adult you woul...I like this but I can see where the adult you would have written it a lot better....there is somethign a little obvious but the imagery is nice and the style is compressed and elegant! RobAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com